Love the tension. It's so like in the TV shows. I despise as much the Kevin of your story as the one in AW. But you know what, I think Jackie has the right to be selfish once in her life and to go on vacation without him! He really doesn't deserve her.
And with Sophie's arrival soon, I feel the tension between Jackie and Kevin will grow up. I think Jackie should leave them and go somewhere where she'll have fun and maybe where a nice guy will innocently flirt with her. She needs to feel loved!
Looking forward to the next chapters!
I like the way you think. Did you mean that the tension will grow or blow? Because either is a possibility waiting to happen :) I know Kevin has really blown it lately, especially when he came home with a spine injury--but there are some ideas spinning from that because of it.
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